Like identical drops of water, we live;
The same space, we inhabit.
Coalesce! You say?
Nay, for a wall have we created,
And like spawn shall we subsist;
With gooey stuff separating. PS: This poem created itself in a dream I had on the night of 28/05/08. Freaky!
:) no comments on the poem.. but i've not been able to visit your blog coz of the weird url :P i think u ought 2 make it more available ..cheers!
ReplyDeleteHeh. I know. Been thinking of the same.
ReplyDelete:) well i've nothing to say but lemme put some physics(phart) here, two drops together we coalese when the attractive forces can outweigh the surface tension :P guess we all have to get out of our differences to tunnel through the surface tesnsion barrior :D
ReplyDeleteNice one.
ReplyDeletewhat isn't freaky about you, temme that.. :P
ReplyDeleteSounds very Kafkaesque ...
ReplyDelete@Prakash
ReplyDeleteI apologize for not keeping a calculator and a table of surface tension coefficient values with me while I sleep. How could I possibly commit such an unfortunate crime?
@Shady
Thanks. :)
@TF
Whatever isn't crazy about you. :P
@Harish
Thanks! I shall take that as a compliment.
wow!too bzy dat u started blogging while dreaming h?
ReplyDeletebtw STOP WRITING POEMS..i never understand dem.hmph!..continue writing write ups plzzz....;)
hmm..
ReplyDeleteall ur creations seem 2 be d product of ur slumber.. perhaps all dat crashin is fruitful afterall [:D]
P.S
have you ever come up wid smthng wen awake?[:P]
@TOAPN
ReplyDeleteGeez! Chill da.
@Ziddi
Er. Only two posts were produced by Dream Productions.
wow...its amazing tht even in ur sleep u can comeup with something so meaningless.....must be modern poetry..:)
ReplyDeleteonli two??
ReplyDeletedats jus d poems naa..
even the story abt d gal and d gangsters and shattering world was from dream productions..
dat makes about 50% of the fictional entries on ur blog..
bin doing too much stats lately..[:P]
@Culsec
ReplyDeleteIt's an art, I tell ya! :)
@Ziddi
Go do your math again. One poem and one story; that's all.
All hail the new statistician on the block!
no i won't do my math again cause i did it pretty well the first tym around..
ReplyDeletei counted d c slot xam morn poem also dat formed jus as u woke up..it had to be d product of d nights thought processes onli..
haah!!
so there 'miss i am so smart'.
@Ziddi
ReplyDeleteThat is technically not the work of Dream productions. It's from Post-Dream Productions. :D
so there 'mr know it all'
I'm so moved by this poem that I'm bursting out of respect for every water-filled pothole I crossed on my way here to be able to coalesce and prove you wrong. I cannot possibly express my feelings other than the one which reads "Damn mosquito!"
ReplyDeleteSo proud of you!
you dream poetry?
ReplyDeleteI always end up sleeping while reading a book, and as i close my eyes, i continue reading stuff..i make up the story going alone!
It s freaky..i distinctly remember later on that i loved what i "read"..but i can never remember it :(
@Abhishek
ReplyDeleteGeez! Thanks!
I'm sure those mosquitoes are good natured and eat only greens.
@dailybloggeriitk
Wow. That's one awesome gift. You might want to check out Underworld
for something even more freaky.