Solitude

Like identical drops of water, we live;
The same space, we inhabit.
Coalesce! You say?
Nay, for a wall have we created,
And like spawn shall we subsist;
With gooey stuff separating.

PS: This poem created itself in a dream I had on the night of 28/05/08. Freaky!

18 comments:

  1. :) no comments on the poem.. but i've not been able to visit your blog coz of the weird url :P i think u ought 2 make it more available ..cheers!

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  2. Heh. I know. Been thinking of the same.

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  3. :) well i've nothing to say but lemme put some physics(phart) here, two drops together we coalese when the attractive forces can outweigh the surface tension :P guess we all have to get out of our differences to tunnel through the surface tesnsion barrior :D

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  4. what isn't freaky about you, temme that.. :P

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  5. @Prakash
    I apologize for not keeping a calculator and a table of surface tension coefficient values with me while I sleep. How could I possibly commit such an unfortunate crime?

    @Shady
    Thanks. :)

    @TF
    Whatever isn't crazy about you. :P

    @Harish
    Thanks! I shall take that as a compliment.

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  6. wow!too bzy dat u started blogging while dreaming h?
    btw STOP WRITING POEMS..i never understand dem.hmph!..continue writing write ups plzzz....;)

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  7. hmm..
    all ur creations seem 2 be d product of ur slumber.. perhaps all dat crashin is fruitful afterall [:D]
    P.S
    have you ever come up wid smthng wen awake?[:P]

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  8. @TOAPN
    Geez! Chill da.

    @Ziddi
    Er. Only two posts were produced by Dream Productions.

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  9. wow...its amazing tht even in ur sleep u can comeup with something so meaningless.....must be modern poetry..:)

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  10. onli two??
    dats jus d poems naa..
    even the story abt d gal and d gangsters and shattering world was from dream productions..
    dat makes about 50% of the fictional entries on ur blog..
    bin doing too much stats lately..[:P]

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  11. @Culsec
    It's an art, I tell ya! :)

    @Ziddi
    Go do your math again. One poem and one story; that's all.

    All hail the new statistician on the block!

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  12. no i won't do my math again cause i did it pretty well the first tym around..
    i counted d c slot xam morn poem also dat formed jus as u woke up..it had to be d product of d nights thought processes onli..
    haah!!
    so there 'miss i am so smart'.

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  13. @Ziddi
    That is technically not the work of Dream productions. It's from Post-Dream Productions. :D
    so there 'mr know it all'

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  14. I'm so moved by this poem that I'm bursting out of respect for every water-filled pothole I crossed on my way here to be able to coalesce and prove you wrong. I cannot possibly express my feelings other than the one which reads "Damn mosquito!"
    So proud of you!

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  15. you dream poetry?

    I always end up sleeping while reading a book, and as i close my eyes, i continue reading stuff..i make up the story going alone!

    It s freaky..i distinctly remember later on that i loved what i "read"..but i can never remember it :(

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  16. @Abhishek
    Geez! Thanks!
    I'm sure those mosquitoes are good natured and eat only greens.

    @dailybloggeriitk
    Wow. That's one awesome gift. You might want to check out Underworld
    for something even more freaky.

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